New Release

So I've left you hanging for too long now. It still doesn't have a chorus, but here's what I have for my latest song. These are what I will use for verses. I didn't really know what it was about directly, although there is a deeper meaning to it, I just wasn't conscious of what it was until after I read it. Maybe that's why I can't write a chorus. I know what it means now.

Monday morning, it's 1 AM
And I just hung up the phone
At 2 AM I went to bed
And dreamt that I was home

It's Tuesday night, half past ten
In the darkness, my memories fade
I go to bed early and hope to wake
In the brightness of morning, a brand new day

Wednesday at dusk and the streetlights
Come on to light up my room
The shadows stretch to the doorway
And all I can think of is you

It's Thursday at noon, the rain just ended
And I feel like I've been here before
How many times have I seen you like this?
It's something I just can't ignore

I woke up Friday at quarter to two
And I knew it just wasn't the same
I took your picture off the wall
A broken promise, an empty frame

Feedback welcomed and encouraged. I have to know if this is really any good. Leave 'em here or shoot me an email, I check it compulsively.